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Lock the beat down, stop repeat now
Looking for the vide, get up off your seat now
We gonna freestyle, feel the boxing heat now
Feel it, one two, come on stomp your feet now
Everybody get down, ready to go,
You ready to flow, then dance like never before
Better than known, the glocks,
Metaphors in a box, rap flow in ice cold, non stop
Back up once again, tons of Barbican,
Drink all night long, smoke an ounce again
Make sure everybody party right tonight
And get 5-0's all out of sight tonight
You and I know, what's going on,
Get it on, rated R, spit upon,
Outlaws like the pentagon,
Throw it up high, y'all feeling it
Recognize voice I be killing with

Yeah yeah yo, bring the funk and let's go
Yeah yeah yo, feel the wrath, the rap flow
Yeah yeah yo, kill the past, the case closed
Show and prove, represent where you coming from (x2)

Let's go, let me enter your dome my cypher
Lesson known, pass it on
No captives, back to back we gonna rap this
Act quick, make you drown like a baptist
Tap your phones, I snatch your thrones,
I gotta get it moving, detach you clones
I top the right spot, fools on my block, when you get em already, let's go
Let em know now!

It's almost time you know got to move it
For your right you know got to prove it
Don't look back you know it let's do it
Do that, do that now, let's bomb first! (x2)
At last! Finally done a second lyrics for my song; Chronicles of Outlaws. Well, this is mostly Urban Nu-Metal Funk in my opinion (Wait, how the hell I made that genre? :confused: Whatever it was, it's just my overly hyperactive mind ^^;). I do hope it flows along the rhythm once our band starts. An example of rhythm is the use of bass in this one. I might try to upload on how the bass flows the song soon enough. Comments are greatly appreciated, and I am ready to fix any flaws in this one! :dummy:
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toryou Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great lyrics..
Oh, I haven't seen you this month....
How are you?
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AkiraSatsujinki Featured By Owner May 28, 2012
Why thank you! :D This was the time when I found out that nu-metal sounds great when combined with Urban Funk XD

Well, since you changed your username, it's hard to meet you often ^^; Still, great to see you again :D

Doing great, thank you :dummy: How's yourself this 2 week holiday?
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toryou Featured By Owner May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome~
About the holidays, I'm fine...But a bit of boringness...
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AkiraSatsujinki Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
Well, if there's no work then it's always boring :D Go find something to do at least, a part time work maybe, or some activities to fill the day, even if it's stupid? :lol: Anything goes as long as you fill up the time and not wasting it :dummy:
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LilMissTroublemaker Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Dayum....that's one sick lyrics.....you have the making of a successful songwriter,i bet record companies will hire you if they see this...U the man
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AkiraSatsujinki Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012
Why thank you so much for the compliments :D Nah, I still have plenty of work to do. I can't just create a song and be called successful, at least not yet. But yeah, we shall see...I might make more, so I'll inform you when I do :dummy:
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LilMissTroublemaker Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2012  Student General Artist
Yeah but great songwriters start from the bottom....show them you got what it takes
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AkiraSatsujinki Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
True, and indeed; I'll show the world what I got in the music industry. But I'll best keep it underground...I hate being mainstreamed
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LilMissTroublemaker Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Underground all the way
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AkiraSatsujinki Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
Fuck yeah! Even though I have to work incredibly hard to be well known, but this is what I wanted to do so far, and what I loved doing; working with others for the band and fans :dummy:
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LilMissTroublemaker Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Student General Artist
Do it with ur heart
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AkiraSatsujinki Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012
Oh yeah I will, my dear :bow:
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shayasundra Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Professional Writer
wonderful rhythm and flow, everything fits very nicely into it, the only line i really don't personally understand is "Outlaws like the pentagon" but that might just be me. I can totally get into this when reading it aloud and seriously look forward to see in in it's full musical splendor!
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GeorgesConcepts Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
Nice work man, all you need is some beats and a few musos up in here and eventually you'll end up with a song!
Epic work all that aside :XD:
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AkiraSatsujinki Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
Fuck yeah, man! Me and my friends were working on da beat. It's going to be Urban Nu-Metal Funk, so expect some insane guitar riffs and epic bass plays :dummy:
And thanks for the compliment, dude :D I'll try to release the song once it's done. For now, I'll stick to writing lyrics :dummy:
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GeorgesConcepts Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012
No probs. Just inject more awesome when you're done :D and repeat for infinite success.
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AkiraSatsujinki Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2012
Awesome dude. Will keep that in mind! :D
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WDLady Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very good job hon! Keep up the great work! :hug::smooch:
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AkiraSatsujinki Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
Why thanks so much, girl! :D :huggle:
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WDLady Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! I wish I knew how to critique songs to give you more helpful feedback, but I'm not an expert. Anyway, keep up with the wonderful songs and lyrics! :love: :blowkiss:
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AkiraSatsujinki Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
Well, at least you give me something to work on :D It doesn't matter if you're a total beginner or an expert; I just find my flaws and fix them :dummy:
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WDLady Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, at least I don't see any spelling mistakes, so that's a plus! :nod: :glomp: Looking forward to seeing more! :eyes:
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AkiraSatsujinki Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Aww, thank you girl :blushes: I'm not the best, but I'll keep rhyming and writing until the end of it :D We never know when I'll stop :dummy:
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X12-1992 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome man.
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AkiraSatsujinki Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2012
You're more than welcome anytime, anywhere. I think I might need to add a little somethin' to this lyric here. I just need to find that spot...:plotting:
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